If I Could Fly Like A Bird Comments

Outburst love that is crystal clear Love that all beings through life steers. If I could fly like a bird Soaring from a far off land to your balcony I shall land Sing sweet songs of eternal love That knows no country, no cast, no creed Knows no gender, no zone, of envy shorn, By time not torn, pure love not.

Wonderfully written, we all have dreaming in common, I love how you ended it, that gives this poem strength.

Dream my friend great poem10+++++++++++++++++++++++

Because love is not a fashion item in the shop window, But an incorruptible light within the human soul, Giving birth to inner harmony in the holyness of peace.. Wonderful poem. sublime thoughts dear poet. you are changing the readers.. tony

walter, i affirm that you say about love in this poem. amen! -glen

A masterfully crafted lyric poem.......10+++

All the money, power and glory of this world are in vain If you remain loveless, Because love is not a fashion item in the shop window, But an incorruptible light within the human soul, Inspiring lines. Good poem Walter 10+

In the gardens of truth, you shall find answers to many questions, - - - - - - - - Because everything is perishable, only the soul is eternal, Whether you're on the throne or below it, Whether you're wealthy or poor, Whether you rule or you're homeless, Whether you're a warrior or a poet, Everybody has something in common - to dream, If I could fly like a bird. - - - - -A deep meaningful poem that espouses love, compassion and truth.

Love and life, the latter not possible without the former.A poem on love very nicely penned.

there the bird (in this beautiful poem) heroic bird who has the brave heart to sing the song of freedom, who has the true heroic strength to fly the independent flag of own nation there the bird (in this beautiful poem) the symbol of unity, harmony and solidarity for the country, for the world people//// excellent

Human soul! ! Musing along, Dreams! Able to fly like a bird; In other to rest on a mountain top. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

in life's sunset it shall be too late to seek a new beginning. it is an amazing philosophy... love and soul are out reach of money...Brilliant 10/10