Friday, February 8, 2013

If I Could Fly Comments

Rating: 4.6

If I could fly high in the air like the birds up above
Then seek out any person that doesn't know how to love
Looking down upon the earth and seeing all of its glory
Take to the sky like the morning dove and tell the all time story
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Patricia Grantham
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Mrinal giri 12 June 2018

Very nice

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Unwritten Soul 16 June 2016

You are wise and stronger woman, definitely seen your spirit strong on this write...soaring high..high than eagle!

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Melvina Germain 06 November 2015

Thank you for such an first of all amazing flight, I'm uplifted, you have motivated me this morning and this poem gives off such fantastic inspiration. I wish for the people of this world to read this and soak up the energy that is woven through every line. I hope you publish this poem in a book, I will be among the first to buy that book Patricia.....

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Sofia Kioroglou 15 October 2015

Awesome piece! I enjoyed every word of it. Good ink. Thank you for sharing your work with the world! Have a nice day!

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But you can fly! You have flown very high in this beautiful poem!

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Lovely lines that are loaded with creativity. Well done my friend!

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Ken E Hall 02 May 2015

Fine thoughts one would do if only you could fly in the sky spreading love and cheer very nice thoughts...you spread love with your words...regards

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 28 April 2015

A delightful verse, teased the senses! Dorothy

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Patricia Grantham 25 April 2015

A heartfelt thank you to PH (for selecting it as Poem of the Day and poet members for your lovely comments on my poem If I Could Fly. I hope to remain worthy of your good wishes an to keep on flying to higher heights. Best regards to all, Patricia

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Godfrey Morris 24 April 2015

Great poem. Well crafted.

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Kim Barney 24 April 2015

I think all of us have had that same dream of flying, but you expressed it very well. And I think that now you must be flying high, now that this poem was selected as Poem of the Day! Congratulations!

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Clarence Prince 24 April 2015

Only I could fly, I would soar like an eagle! Nice work, thanks for sharing!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 24 April 2015

a good heart wants to fly to see the miseries of the world and willingly likes to rectify all those humanitarian issues., , I like the concept and the rhythm of this beautifully written wonderful poem. but you may be too late...may be 105 years...Though the governments of the world watch the agony of the world through their legal and spy satellites they have not done much, except selling the arms to the war ridden countries and feeding their refugees..

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Chinedu Dike 24 April 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction. A poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing and remain blessed Patricia. It's always a pleasure to read your poems.

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Jaishree Nair 24 April 2015

Flying high above the world like a bird spreading love and joy .wonderful thought. Thanks for sharing.

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Darlene Marion 26 January 2015

This is a lovely poem.

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Trong Phan 16 October 2014

Human have not wings, but always can fly by his imaginaries and intelligence. Deep and nice poem.

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Ramesh Rai 10 October 2014

A beautiful lovely poem giving me wings to fly.

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Amitava Sur 24 October 2013

t's a lovely poem with noble thoughts, wishing people with all goodness. So good to read. Patricia a poet can not be a poet or can not excel either if there is no dream within..... Love this imagery.

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Efe Benjamin 18 September 2013

lovely write, good use of imagery, great poem i'll give it a 10+

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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