Wednesday, May 11, 2011

If I Could Do These Things Comments

Rating: 3.0

If I could share love, I would share it with you,
If I could share joy, I would make you happy
If I had your shoes, I would walk your mile,
If I could do these things, I would do them for you,
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B.J. Ayers
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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