If I Could Change What I Did Comments

Best poem I've ever read .wow...please keep posting relatable poems.

4 1/2, make it 5 (five) stars. I found you in list of 'new poets' here. Welcome. : ) bri

BUT, this one I've still saved so I'll resend it: 'last stanza: 'make it last' means? KEEP your head held high? I think so. AND 'anew'? 'anew / (əˈnjuː) / adverb over again; once more in a different way'

I THINK some of my comments already were sent, one about the use of 'slack'. PH made me sign in again, so I'm not sure. : (

By 'slack' I believe you mean 'cessation in movement or flow'. So, time never stops advancing. Sometimes people don't 'take enough time' to make the 'right' decision. ; (