If I Could Comments

I'm but As human. Nice work.

Poetry is such term where there is no saturation. The ocean may dry up but poetry will never. Poetry makes all impossible to possible. This is also one that inspired me again. A very splendid exquisite write. Thanks for sharing.

Splendid Roopa....! What fantastic images! Yes, we, as parents, long to give all that is within our reach and beyond to make our children happy! This has been the same with our parents too! But could we fathom the depth of their love in full measure then..... I really wonder! So... even if our children fail, we can we blame them? If i could hold you close to my heart; And tell you that the biggest gift; What God showered on me - Is that He put you in my arms.......... Love these lines! Top marks!

My God what kind of an imagination is that dear Roopa. a shower of fireflies, dewdrops, light and light years, crown, walking along the milky way, clouds that float, whipping the rainbow, bind the universe around, ..-. but i am just a dot, a wonderful mother. i want to put the dream in your hands. ohhhhhhhhhhhh lovely Rupa, marvellous. i like poets and poetesses writing in very simple words and full with images and symbols. loved ur poem. God bless you

Stunning expresion with marvellous phraseology. I like the lines most are ...If i could hold you close to my heart; And tell you that the biggest gift; What God showered on me - Is that He put you in my arms. Intensive poem. TFS. ....10