Tuesday, May 1, 2012

If I Could Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watched her leave,
Taking hearts along,
Creating memories of pains,
Written in blood,
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venessa ambrose
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Larry Cow 01 May 2012

so true. this is beautiful.

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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2012

Brilliant! A very nicely written and touching write that really moved me! This amazing write brought tears to my eyes for it reminded me of my beloved mother in her last days on Earth! It is not easy to face a sad reality of witnessing a loved one going forever! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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