Thursday, September 4, 2008

If I Could Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could put my lyrics
Over the right beat
A tight beat
It would play on, play on
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Absent Wryta
COMMENTS
~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 27 November 2008

Thnx 4 the comment I really like this one The way you put, the words you used, .. you couldn't have done it any better I give it a 10 =]

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pied piper 11 September 2008

Very beautiful sentiment. I like the romance of music here.. Good read..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A sweet poem with aromatic flavor. I love it.

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Tom Balch 05 September 2008

Really flows, lovely read regards Tom

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Adeline Foster 04 September 2008

I do really appreciate this poem. As a fellow Canadian, it was with anticipation that I read your poems. London and the Guelph Gorge were favorite field trips for my family. Adeline

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Sathyanarayana M V S 04 September 2008

lyrical beauty...very nice poem indeed.

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