Sunday, May 18, 2008

If I Could Comments

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If I could touch your face,
And kiss your lips.
If your heart was a place,
Into which I could slip.
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Susan Sybenga
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Rony Patra 19 May 2008

It reminds me of my own love story......a wonderful piece....

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 18 May 2008

If you were with me, Life would be sublime Seems to be the extension of earlier poem..........good one

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Susan Sybenga

Susan Sybenga

Tulsa, Oklahoma, USA
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