Tuesday, August 16, 2011

If I Can Find The Way Comments

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She loved little children
But could never have any of her own-
I picture her now in gardens of cherubs
Tenderly twining her with silken ribbons;
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Patti Masterman
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Hans Vr 16 August 2011

This is wonderful poetry, deserving a standing ovation. The images are so well worked out and full of heavenly feeling. I pray all of us find the way, fantastic.

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Jim Troy 16 August 2011

Breath taking work of art. Such exactness of gentle strokes to show this picture in the pastels and perhaps colors even diaphanous in hues most satisfying for the spirit eye.......... I love this great poetry painting Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 16 August 2011

like this one a lot!

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2011

Patti, your poem start with a lovely flower bud who loves butterfly, and another part you tell about another branches in another direction and how it goes? slowly met at a stalk between a bud and the another branch, it create a strong relationship as a tree to see to heal what they can do together...in a piece of life...something she feels missed but i know she realised she was blessed...and I know too she will find the way :) _Unwritten Soul

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