Saturday, December 1, 2018

If I Can Comments

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If I knew how to show what felt in my heart
And make someone to believe the things
Share the sorrows and make them happy
I want to know what you hate for
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Shelvakumari Thachayil
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 March 2020

Just live each day and throw it all agony Don't look back or never break at all! Be careful or remember the limitations....../// nice expression about life which always hails the imagination.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 December 2018

Silent emotions make day special Mind conclude the movements without seeing The soul wandering in the nature To provoke to do something....touching expression with nice message. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Kayode Are 01 December 2018

To know how to make someone else believe our view is a big riddle. Good try.

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Susheela Shiju 01 December 2018

well penned! Keep writing!

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Shelvakumari Thachayil

Shelvakumari Thachayil

Kozhikode, Kerala
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