Thursday, August 25, 2011

If I A Lonely Pebble Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I a lonely pebble
That did rest upon the shore,
Then all my dreams would be fulfilled
I'd never yearn for more,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Sandra Hillawi 03 February 2012

You have a great way of making the reader want to read to the end. I like all your poems that Ive read so far. All have a hypnotic rhythm that takes you on a journey into the essence of the poem. Enjoy them very much.

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Vipins Puthooran 02 September 2011

Hi, You took me to a beautiful shore where i could see a hundreds of pebble in my imagination.

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 September 2011

The wonderful expressions of a nature poet.Truly a serene escapade into beauty and a soothing feeling of a poem.Well done..

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Tsira Gogeshvili 25 August 2011

ANDREW, it's beautifully....10... Ts.

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