Sunday, December 9, 2018

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If I wrote in clouds ten miles high
If I mastered the skies above you
If I colored a rainbow in hues never seen
If I calmed your seas for just one moment
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Edmund Strolis
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2019

To turn back time! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. C

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Dawn Novus 06 January 2019

That beautiful strange rainbow, seen breaking through the love haze cloud is reminiscent of the calm ocean where you held her strong and free is not an If now but a done deed..and now even If she could, .... She would never look beyond Your eyes. Truly beautiful and heart rendered poetry. Thank you for your sharing.

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Susan Williams 10 December 2018

Well, I just melted into a puddle! ! ! ! ! Women all over the world just glared at their husbands wondering why they cannot say such beautiful words of love that embrace them. Women would dance through the day for just one sentence half as romantic as your closing verse. Edmund, you are the poet king of love. 10+++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list!

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Sarah Persson 10 December 2018

Regrets spoken but oh so beautifully

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