Monday, November 23, 2009

If I Comments

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If I fall will you pick me up,
or watch as I crash to earth?
If I dance will you join me,
or sit back to watch the waltz?
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Fiona Davidson
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Matt Mooney 06 May 2010

Your wish is my command. Shall we dance? Your words bring life to your desires.

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Barbara Terry 28 November 2009

I read the comments by the others, and I didn't see one say they actually felt the sadness and pain in these lines. Being there still I can feel that sadness and pain. This is a very emotional poem and the questions are what I have been asking most of my life. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Carol Gall 23 November 2009

fi great poem no guy better let you down 10

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Catrina Heart 23 November 2009

wow wonderful play of IF's in life....love this piece! ! !

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 November 2009

This guy better have some good answers for these creative queries, young lass! LOL! ....Enjoyed this, as always! FjR

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