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Excellent piece of writing. Lot of depth in the poem and wonderfully articulated. Its a perfect 10 from me Janelle. Dipy

such a beautiful piece and yet another poem worth remembering it was a pleasure to read, thank you Janelle, keep it up.

a well written piece, embellished with sensitive thoughts. good job, janelle. : -)

Nice piece of poetry, it is filled with anticipations of love for someone. Many can relate to it including me. Enjoyed it. worth 9 from me.