Wednesday, January 25, 2017

If He Knew My Circle Comments

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Oh to curl around him
The way a vine climbs a tree
Or a cat circles itself up in warmth
like a coiled snake
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Susan Lacovara
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Daniel Brick 25 January 2017

Oh, he knows now! This poem is so persuasive it could redeem a man as wicked as Don Juan who made love to a thousand woman because he could not love one. It takes a very intimate, focused, and patient relationship for a woman to discover how she can best express her love, and for a man to appreciate such sweet ministrations. And switch the nouns in that sentence and it's equally true of the other partner. The initial passion of a relationship is a wonderful thing, but it is the long-term of affection that your poem highlights that makes the love affair resonate for a lifetime! !

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