Monday, April 29, 2019

If Got, O Give And Go Comments

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Now that you've got, O give and go,
Bare ribs and bones you see whenso,
Spare bread crumbs, no more, ere you go,
Alms, nor aid— give as if you owe.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 30 April 2019

Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: Now that you've got, O give and go, Quiet, quack-less, a kindly feat, Resting not even to wipe brow, Nor sweat beads of reward, sour-sweet.......so impressive. A beautiful poem on christmas having nice execution. Thanks for sharing. Thanks Kumarmani Mahakul, your appreciation means a lot.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 April 2019

Member: Savita Tyagi Comment: Marvelous poem with a wonderful sincere message. If you are blessed to have just give and go without looking back, without any expectation. Enjoyed the smooth rhyme and rhythm. A big 10. Sorry for this copy and paste job. It seems the web is slow. Thank you indeed for appreciating the poem.

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Savita Tyagi 29 April 2019

Marvelous poem with a wonderful sincere message. If you are blessed to have just give and go without looking back, without any expectation. Enjoyed the smooth rhyme and rhythm. A big 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2019

Now that you've got, O give and go, Quiet, quack-less, a kindly feat, Resting not even to wipe brow, Nor sweat beads of reward, sour-sweet.......so impressive. A beautiful poem on christmas having nice execution. Thanks for sharing.

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