If God Sends My Maa For A While! Comments
I shall lay my head on her knees
Believing that God must have cured her arthritic joints in heaven,
Then she will brush my hair with her fingers
And I shall tell her all my soul suffered from;
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One of the best poems i have read really it is an amazing piece of poetry! :)
This poem overwhelmed me with sadness. I could relate to your 'scattered thoughts', dear poetess. 'and I won’t let her know - - - that my pen bleeds still' - so wonderfully the poem ends, kudos!
But because I have lost my tantrums wild Somewhere in the fields of my childhood It is an awe-inspiring share and an expensive tribute on Mother.
Outstanding poem...Heartfelt.........Artistic writing...WOW...I loved it. Dil se re....
This's beautiful. I love it, contains express emotions and deep thought. God bless you
It is such a wonderful poem in its expression touching the very core of heart ! Especially the lines- - -I shall complain of the bouquet of roses That pricked my hands despite silk ribbon And scotch tape woven around it carefully.- - - - - - - - - Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem.
as *Sunprincess* wrote: love this....you have shared with us a beautiful and intimate poem... it's like we have looked in through a window to your heart...the intimacy in this poem is astounding...so nice to read. and i especially enjoyed these lines (which Valsa George also mentioned) : But because I have lost my tantrums wild Somewhere in the fields of my childhood; BUT, unlike some others, i shed no tears. i had a great mother (whom i loved as a child 'should' love his mother) , and she got her way and died, none to soon, at age 90. but no tears. people should not live forever, except in the memory of others. i also especially enjoyed: I shall tell her the tricks of the winds Blowing roughly on me leaving all others And of clouds that shower benign rain On all others leaving me, Though I stand under them with a bowl In my hands raised skywards Which stays dried up; i shall send this poem to MyPoemList. bri :)
an amazing poem, capable of my 20th vote without any hesitation.
some children share everything about their life with their mother... even i do... shes my best frnd.. and and when shes not with us, nothing feels good.. evrything that we used to do with her or tell her seems all bored.. we actuly dnt feel lyk doin nythin. but if she see us, and finds that we are not happy... she will be sad... for her happines lies in our hapines! ! ! ! so always belive that shes beside us... & watchin and listin to us.... Mother wants us to stay happy..... ALWAYS! ! beeautifullllllllllllllll poem! ! ! i loved it! ! ! this poem brght tears in my eyes......
, , .. this is a kind of poem where the reader would fell honoured to read it, , , , a heart touchinhg poem, , , , greattt
A beautiful write this is indeed. It gave me a quite a shiver just remembering mom. When I think of the wonderful mother that I was allowed to have I can only say thank God for her and the love that she gave. Your poem echoes those sentiments. So inspiring your write. Regards.
Nice feeling of a child with imaginary speaking with her mother.
Your pain for a Mother that you loved is so open and raw but that same love will hopefully ease your pain. Another amazing write :)
I love your poem with such raw honesty and deep emotions you endearingly paint in words a beautiful portrait of your dear mother and also reveal your innermost thoughts!
Very heart touching write dear ma'am! I couldnt refrain my eyes wet after reading such a lovesome piece imbibed with many sweet memories and holding our breath not to share the pains with appeared mam! Rated 10+
Its a beautiful combination of lovely memories and painful feelings.poem packed with emotions and innocence and all the things that we can tell to our mothers only. simply marvelous.i am so overwhelmed by my feelings that i cant even dare to critically analyse it.
Paul Adrian Fried - Writer, Editor, Composer, Consultant at Jubilee-Lampstand Publications To: Shahzia Batool Naqvi Date: September 5,2013 Very nice poem! ...all the tragic tunes interpret my heart ... my pen bleeds still. Many lovely lines! Paul
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MANY MANY..... HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY. MAY GOD BLESS YOU WITH LOVE AND PEACE. EACH AND EVERY RAY OF SUN MAY BRING A LOT OF JOYS IN YOUR LIFE. HAVE A NICE DAY WITH FULL OF FUN AND JOYS. HAPPY BIRTH DAY.