If God Asks Me Comments

Beautiful lines

Brilliant Composition sir.

Beautiful. 10

Concept is very good. Beautiful poem.

Your poem is very beautiful and your expectations are admirable. Moving and encouraging.

Lovely poem. This is what every poet would want from God. It is a sobering experience when that creative power slips away from us. God gives and God takes. And it is certainly is satisfying to see others moving on that path spreading the joy of poetry.

Verily, a lovely write Loved reading it Added to my favorite list.....10

Good imagination, may happen a day, Very nice, thank you.

This poem utterly charmed me! ! ! Praises for speaking of the lowliest creatures of God's creation- -ants. You understand the importance of every creature which I have to admit I hadn't thought of the magnificence of ants before! These lines especially drew me- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -] that speaks the language of all creatures that expresses the mirth of a blooming flower that expresses the grief of a withering flower that expresses the pains and pleasures of an ant working tough for foster of baby ant

Your poem is a beautiful, heartfelt prayer. Surely God heard you. What more can a poet dream of than to be heard by God in His kindness and beauty.

A powerful and positive prayer that is both creative and compelling!

I wish I had read it day before last night God asked me who is RR I said Give me time I will let you know Now i will share your poem with HIM also

If God asks me what do you want? I Say, YOU you Oh My Lord.

Wonderfully expressed answer. You take the freedom to tell God what you desire, very humbly and succinctly. I love the use of your words when you pen.. Love your thoughts, Ramesh Raiii Thank you

Very inspiring write and truly human views, realizing needs as well as wants.

wow... If others will be asked by God they might mention a lot of other things..but you.. you want simple things...and you ask first guidance for poem writing.. SALUTE poems can inspire people poems can motivate poems bring smiles Thank you for your poem

I love your poem expressing your noble desires to the Almighty. Thank you poet Rai.

Beautifully expressed answer telling God what you desire, very humbly and succinctly worded. Love your thoughts, Ramesh. Thank you, RoseAnn

This is a beautiful poem asking God the Creator to bestow upon you great things. We have not because we ask not. A very heartfelt write.

A very noble wish is expressed to make a profound poet to serve the mankind by writing poems to give them ed messages with values.