If Feelings Had A Choice Comments

f feeling had a choice I would have moved on before him If feeling had a choice I would have ignored him till the time he doubts on his own existence. love i s a mystery. the greatest of all mysteries....... you are experiencing and expressing it in this poem......... may God bless u to find your real love. tony

(cont.) BUT EVEN SO, i have found this poem very enjoyable. very! it is SO...thought-full, and i suppose emotion-full. a lovely write about a 'sweet-and-sour' episode in your young life? besides, ....if i left my suggestions, i would not get my other work done on PH and elsewhere! ! hee-hee. at least not as soon. i'm tempted to look at one more of yours, but i'll save till another day. to MyPoemList. bri :)

He found his new world after promising me his world....a favorite line for me. it is very 'telling', 'touching', and (maybe) 'tragic'! ! ! there ARE numerous suggestions i could make to make this seem more like it was written by ME or by another who has 'grown up speaking and writing English', ....... (cont.)

The great one... Thnx for sharing...10 +++ You may like to read my poems too. Naila

I wonder if feeling had a choice. I wonder if I could reset my thought. I wonder what was the exact moment when he decided to walk away? He found his new world after promising me his world. If feeling had a choice I would have moved on before him. The realization that feelings dont have a choice. love is always a mystery...... start again, dont get stuck...... life is much more than one person...... good luck. tony