Tuesday, July 24, 2007

If Ever You Comments

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If ever you give me a chance,
I would shun all your sorrow from you,
Convert each tear into pearl,
Make happiness your slave
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Geeta Nair
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If ever you give me a chance... nice poem....10 i shall not ask for chance rather seize it at once force you to accept but not allow to be wept

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Subbaraman N V 22 December 2007

It is a great poem! Let us love all, serve all!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 July 2007

And it is beautiful one.......great potential that revels

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Kelly Allen Vinal 24 July 2007

What a gentle, competent poem! Well done!

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Sallie Howson 24 July 2007

that was beautiful..so tender

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Geeta Nair

Geeta Nair

Kalyan (Mumbai)
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