Monday, August 20, 2007

If Ever Comments

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If ever i were to love you,
would you love me back?
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Marcia Morris 25 August 2007

Very nice poem, I like the read of this. It got my attention from start to finish. Keep writing!

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Lolita Hiroshi 24 August 2007

how can i explain that this poem makes me wonder? ! ? ! Simple, and understandable! ! ! it pulled me in as i read the first sentence... the first few words were all it took to grab my attention. i like that with the usage of very simple words, easy to understand, you can add so much emotion into them!

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