If Eve Had Been A Man Comments

2 – line 15: there, not they " carnal recreation grew" ...grown i no longer believe in God, but God maybe SHOULD have made all people men! ! ! Or all women. I think it's a sin to not proofread more! bri :)

1 – I HAD TO read this after seeing the title! And WASN'T " she" ? ? lines 5 & 7: had or have? lines 2 & 10: mean what? line 12: crafted? i think maybe crafty lines 13 & 14 seem 'the same' to me

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