If Earth's Tomorrow Comments

your passion for our beloved earth shines through in this verse....great write!

Nice and very needed theme to be penned, is very well penned, by your pen.

well penned! May Today be better than Yesterday May Tomorrow be better than Today ThanksForSharing/

Well written thoughts and concern about the earth...a good poem....10

Hi Obed - This is a great poem with really good structure - four quatrains and a denoument double. Consistent rhyme pattern a a b b etc. It need a little attention to metre (number of syllables in a line) . The context is excellent it merits a TEN. V 1 Planet earth has problems - trees decreasing - wars increasing - HELP. V 2 Do we learn from yesterdays mistakes - NO. V 3 I have eight Grandchildren Obed - who will still be around in 2060 - so I do think ahead - AWESOME. V 4 Power of Positive Thinking - think about it you know it makes sense. V 5 Conservation - Conservation - Conservation. Thanks OBED - if all Teenagers thought like this the whole world would be a much better place. Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

very great job 10++ ITS VERY CREATIVE

What a positive thinking to face tomorrow come what may.

'With simple things lets make a difference.' I pray it is enough... Very nicely written Obed!

Hi Obed, this is very nice, each word has their own meaning, I think, this is the best from yours I've ever read, the best part is about tomorrow. Great... Keep writing

Hi Obed; you are becoming quite the poet. This is constructed quite nicely..(smile)