Imagine if borders sealed no nations,
Nor yet were there narrow honours to guard,
And men were free from nationalist notions
Which as the time passed were cemented hard;
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Wow, what a wonderful Sonnet. It captures the ever elusive right of mankind... freedom.. Brilliantly and beautifully penned. Onto my Poem List.
This 2010 poem, which I too liked, had not found much attention. I feel good you read it and found it worthy enough. It is unfortunate that a poet has no idea about the readership of his poem (only about comments/feedback) . Thanks indeed.
Your first line, Aniruddha Sir! I cite here: Imagine if borders sealed no nations, your last line: And peace prevailed on planet free from war. So true! A mesmerized Sonnet, beautifully worded. Thank you so much for sharing, Aniruddha Sir. A 10 Topscore beacuse of its theme of PEACE. I have enjoyed reading this precious poetry.
And for what i wrote underneath, I must also thank you very much, dear poet Sylvia Francis Chan. Two good poets appreciating my poem...