Saturday, June 15, 2019

If Better Off Than Before - I Comments

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Better off if are we than ere were,
Why we still squirrel things in our bill?
Why our smiling face should go so rare?
Why man greeds forever the more still?
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 June 2019

Growing greed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 June 2019

Thank you dear reader for visiting this poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 June 2019

The decline of spiritual values and growing influence of materialism in the society, in general, has white washed the boundaries between need and greed. The self centered modern man/ nations have lost sensitivities to great extent towards society, as a result. A thought provoking great write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 June 2019

Thanks Ratnakar Mandlik for your appreciatiobn, you have read the situation well.

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