If Animals Could Speak Comments

Well written Wini :) I like the way you observed them, especially their eyes pleading you to set them free. Feeling a second person/life forms emotions through unsaid words makes you a better person on both grounds, as a better human being and better poet. Yes, NOT just you are limited, each one of us is. Few of us are permanent inmates of cages we build all around us (thus we are the animals, without wings) Good write and all the best :)

a man killing her son for fur, keep quite like a broken bell. answer to all I do seek. a capsize the soul - of a poet -with new dreaming vision