What if angels show behind the dropped ball
And Christ appears; but not for all,
The trumpets sound and the elect are raised,
Would you be found giving God praise?
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Great composition. Your rhyming didn't interfere with your message and thoughts.
awww, i love this! your faith is awesome! +10 as always :)
'What if Christ appears, but not for all'.., i put my emphasis on this meaningful line...that's the trajedy with most believers...religion they believe in...and not in God! good poetic exercise
its been a while since ive been on the site, and now im back... and this is just another incredible lesson and poem..leslie CAN you make a bad poem? ?
. .....& Yes, I kNOw jesuS, very well... and yet, the poor, poor soul is so smitten & as the goDs' pummel daily. And, strangely, I was hE, and now... and now...I'm Dog. Ponder! .
A wonderful faithful write, as always, Leslie, thanks for sharing your inspiring poetry with us :) Yelena M.
wonderful poem for Christ, very well written, lovely rhymes Be blessed 10/10 Mari