Tuesday, April 28, 2009

If A Man Could Dream... Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's the majestic manipulation of manifested feathers,
somehow created for organisms to evolve into fowl.
What happened down the line that determined this distinction?
Did He ever pause to ponder if I wanted wings?
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Kale Beaudry
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Chloe Young 07 July 2009

i love this poem, it seems a bit humorous at first and then the last last line is absolutely beautiful and says it all <3 10

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Roshni D'Souza 24 May 2009

'Dare a man not dream a dream in dire need of a respite? ' I love that line! ! ! ! !

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Kesav Easwaran 11 May 2009

your imaginations there take wings at their will...good write...i liked...10

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Susan Bagley 02 May 2009

I absolutely LOVE this poem and right this minute it is going into my favorites. Great Job Kale. Susan

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Kale Beaudry

Kale Beaudry

Vancouver, BC, Canada
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