Monday, January 5, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

If a rogue paintbrush clattered to the floor and happened to catch my eye,
I would lure it to my fingers with a palette smothered with rich, vivid paints
Luxurious hues and shades it would love
And rested in my light but commanding grip, I would let it unlock for me
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Leslie Ching
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Brianna Trombley 17 January 2009

you are truly inspiring, way beyond your years, the description with which you write is brilliant, i luv this poem, thanks for sharing

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Ken Suh 15 January 2009

Amazing@@! ! ! ! You're my age and your doing this kinda thing! ! ! ! Awesome! @! ! ! ! 10 for you! ! ! wow! how long have you been writing? I've been writing to for five six months now :) - Peace!

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Randy Hogan 11 January 2009

Wow......now thats what i am talking about....you go girl.. well done...10++++

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Annie Girl 10 January 2009

this is really good i give this a 10 and up good work

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Blue Eyes 07 January 2009

i love the metaphores they are great.i love ur decriptive talent too a 10 for sure.

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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