If ~ The stars above one night, e'er
Forgot to shine.
I shalt always have thine (loving glow) ,
To gaze upon divine.
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Just excellent Thad, I really like your style of writing, such beautiful imagery too. Best wishes, Andrew
My absolute favourite by your skillfull hand so far Love duncan X
Love in devotion...or devotion in love? Could be both...I think you worship love more than anything in life, Thad...a write pleasing to read and soothing to mind...10
If ~ Th' stars above one night Perchance forget to shine ...................................... Beautifully it sounds... Remarkably, sincerity decorates love poetry... 10.... Best wishes, Tsira
Kipling would be proud of this as would dear Shakespeare. You express love so clearly within the rhyme scheme, it flows like loves river....Wonderful work. Smiling at you, Tai
Welcome back, Thad my friend, What a beautiful Poem to share with us... Andy 10
A lovely poem Thad, if you have nothing else you have your love, well penned 10 Lynda xx
Another beautiful love story, Thad, as only you can write them! Loved it, my friend! Another '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn