Thursday, November 27, 2008

~ If ~ Comments

Rating: 2.7

If ~ The stars above one night, e'er
Forgot to shine.
I shalt always have thine (loving glow) ,
To gaze upon divine.
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Thad Wilk
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Marilyn Lott 19 March 2009

Another beautiful love story, Thad, as only you can write them! Loved it, my friend! Another '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Andrew Blakemore 02 December 2008

Just excellent Thad, I really like your style of writing, such beautiful imagery too. Best wishes, Andrew

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Indira Babbellapati 29 November 2008

such positive way of looking...! ! !

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Duncan Wyllie 29 November 2008

My absolute favourite by your skillfull hand so far Love duncan X

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Kesav Easwaran 28 November 2008

Love in devotion...or devotion in love? Could be both...I think you worship love more than anything in life, Thad...a write pleasing to read and soothing to mind...10

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Tsira Goge 28 November 2008

If ~ Th' stars above one night Perchance forget to shine ...................................... Beautifully it sounds... Remarkably, sincerity decorates love poetry... 10.... Best wishes, Tsira

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totally disturbed 27 November 2008

Nice poem it's very good. take care Wendy

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Tai Chi Italy 27 November 2008

Kipling would be proud of this as would dear Shakespeare. You express love so clearly within the rhyme scheme, it flows like loves river....Wonderful work. Smiling at you, Tai

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Fiona Davidson 27 November 2008

Lovely words making a lovely poem...thanks

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 November 2008

Welcome back, Thad my friend, What a beautiful Poem to share with us... Andy 10

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Lynda Robson 27 November 2008

A lovely poem Thad, if you have nothing else you have your love, well penned 10 Lynda xx

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