If Comments

I enjoyed your poem and it made me think of other 'If.'

Makes me want to keep on reading until the sun shines again across your page David Another profound and well-presented piece Love duncan X

What an atmosphere you conjure up with so few words. My hat off to you sire. t x

Short and sweet, but oh, so complete! Nice little poem, David............. Linda :)

What a lovely write. You are great sir!

Nice words, enough said; If only? Bob Blackwell

I love this poem David, I really like the last line 'if the sun shone everyday the black clouds would go away'. Excellent write---Melvina---

Very well written poem David. If is a word that applies to many aspects of life. Loved it. Hugs Pam

if only indeed... the sun would shine... nice short poem david..