Tuesday, August 25, 2015

If….. Comments

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If man had the compassion
To end all suffering
In the world
If man had the wisdom
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David Wood
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Margaret O Driscoll 13 September 2015

Very true David, if only! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 September 2015

Then humanity; if only if we are ready to do the right thing to save the world. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us

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Raymond Farrell 06 September 2015

A lot of mighty big ifs for sure.

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Sanjukta Nag 26 August 2015

Those ifs could have made our life better but alas! sensational poem. thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2015

If man will be the embodied divine qualities that you have depicted in this poem so nicely, then humanity has Just a chance of survival. Marvellous presentation. An intensive poem I like most.....10

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Amitava Sur 25 August 2015

So truly you said it David! ! We the humans have become so inhuman, we are divided in the name of religion, color of skin, rich and poor and in every discipline that now we have to start again from the beginning to survive. Thanks for sharing.

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