Wednesday, October 30, 2013

If Comments

Rating: ★4.9

If I had the right notes I would play you a tune
But all the notes I have are mute...
If I had the right words I would make you a song
But all the words I have are wrong....
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Neera Lollbeeharry
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Nicolas Frichot 26 November 2015

Je l'aime bien. Bonne continuation :)

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Chinedu Dike 23 December 2014

A lovely and well articulated romantic train of thoughts encapsulated into a poem. A nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 November 2013

It's a beautiful love poem! 'Make a rhythm out of them, if you can... '...This line keeps resonating in my heart.

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Neera Lollbeeharry 16 November 2013

Thank you for the words of encouragement.

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Faraj Nyandiko 14 November 2013

Nice piece of Art..Lovly.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 October 2013

simple, lovely, and profound...the poem resonates!

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