Saturday, June 22, 2013

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If,
i would be a bird in the sky,
i would rule the heights i deserve,
i would rest in the lap of stars,
i would resemble every turn......
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simran arora
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Hazel Durham 06 July 2013

Amazing lines with a lovely flow, very thought provoking! You show great potential!

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Gaius Gbeti Kafui 27 June 2013

If really portray the desire to be part of an entity.it pretty interesting.

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Gaius Gbeti Kafui 27 June 2013

if really portray the desire to be part of an entity.personally i like the piece.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 26 June 2013

If i would be is a very nice poem, Simran. Nice thoughts.

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Vishal Sharma 22 June 2013

this poem reminded me my ex girlfriend, who took used to write like this great poem and memorable lines

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