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your genre on romance is brilliant too, , , , wonderful write, , ,

I salute your talent that excels even the theme chosen! You have handled a romantic thought with the scent of true love and the spill of passion. Well written Jahan Zaib.

I am amazed at the cute rhymes you use in your poems! .. This is one of my favourite :)

What can more i say than a great and awesome work, usually i am not much into same repeating lines but hey this is awesome, i truly loved the words and meaning, very deep and swimming with smile i am! but the quote of if you need a lily, a bunch i 'll be bring....be careful, someone ask a lily not lilies, then do as asked..even you sound to be sweeter but there is a trick in a A there hahahaha joking, wonderful write Jahan_Soul

This is so romantic, heartfelt with such deep sentiments, great rhythm and flow, a gem! !

If you were the sea, I wouldn't need land If you craved the desert, I'd gather the sand If you want to read, I will write you our life If you seek a husband, then please be my wife. Oh I liked the idea behind the structure and flow an awful lot! This worked well! And I got carried away! ! ! Good job and a pleasing romantic write

If you ever meet me in life..I'm going to give you a warm hug sir. Fantastic! ! !

What a romantic poem here! ! ! ! Beautiful and sensitive! ! ! ! Love it! ! !