Tuesday, February 21, 2012

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Rating: 4.9

If man would pause to meditate
To look within and seek to find
The treasures locked inside himself
In deeper levels of his mind
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Valerie Dohren
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Joseph Anderson 04 June 2012

A probing write. If more people would read and dwell on this, maybe we could change.A potent thought

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June Walker 29 May 2012

I agree with the sentiments...and if only! !

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Walterrean Salley 29 April 2012

A poem of beauty and truth. Great job.

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William F Dougherty 18 April 2012

Compare same themes in Blake, Milton, Wordsworth.

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Karen Deeks 18 March 2012

If.... Only... Every man could read this and contemplate. Bravo on another fine flow of thoughts to consider. Thanks. Karen

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Naomi Hinshaw-hersh 29 February 2012

Excellent and bravo, Valerie! This gave me goosebumps!

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Pheko Motaung 28 February 2012

A fabulous poem! Like the beautifully expressed message.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 February 2012

Peace in our time.

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Eric Cockrell 21 February 2012

so simple, so true, so beautiful... if only!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 21 February 2012

You are a lovely lady. I am with you. You can see and suffer with the world. Just know, that everything works for good and you find the secret.

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Valerie Dohren

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