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nice, nice...liked the style...true freedom poetically. Beautiful poem

Good one. In very limited words expressed what you want to say.

Nu stile, unique. the beauty bout poetry is being able to create ur stile. freedom of inner Xpression.

well done... if... we listened to our hearts we could hear other people! very good poem!

nice...and i agree to suen bewaji

Great job......... makes me rub my chin and consider........ I love your style and choice of words............. I think you are a polyhistor........ Thanks for asking me to read and comment............. Respectfully: ........... Jim Troy

I love your style......... It makes me rub my chin and consider things..... and your ending is profound and a wise choice of wording..... Glad you asked me to read and comment........ I feel you are a polyhistor........ Respectfully: Jim Troy

l love the way u do it in ur own way, the massage is really clear. keep it up