Wednesday, May 10, 2006

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If my tears could dissolve all the pain in the world
My eyes would be wet all the time
If I could take a mothers pain away for the loss of her child
I would take all her pain away
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jessica roberts
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Kennedy Phadima 08 December 2006

dont we all wish the world could be a better place, nice verse Jessica!

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Brian Dorn 28 October 2006

It sounds like if you could make the world perfect... you would. Great write, Jessica! Brian

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Selfless wonderful thoughts.... all compressed into one beautiful poem. Great write!

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