Thursday, September 17, 2009

If Comments

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if there was love in me
where would it be?
would it be in trusting me?
if i wasnt so shattered on the inside who knows what i would feel
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Jewel Workman
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Kym Toohey 14 October 2009

Ahh the mortal heart yearns n' burns... once your mind follows it through the flames then wisdom comes... when the heart borders on immortal then suffering gives way to acceptence... and you say... let it be.... as you see a new door opening in the distance. Then don't look back. In this poem I recalled my youth... Nice work.

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