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wow' that was a heart touching poem keep up the good job

Hello Yuri, wow, this is a very delightful poem and wo well written I felt I was speaking to a blade of grass. Good job! Loyd

A good poem, liked it very much. A little different from Rudyard Kipling’s of the same title, but almost as moving. Of course, the answers are there for those who seek. Check out mine and go read more which can be found on geocities.com/adelinefoster. Adeline

Nothing in this world is permanent except change...We are all created in His own image and likeness...everything has its own purpose of living even a tiny creature that we look like pest in our life.

a meaningful poem.i like it.thanks for reading my poem the burning poem.i am waiting yr poem on this subject.......

Excellent poem (IF) only we knew the answers - but I suppose we will soon know?

Great job Yuri, very metaphysical of you.....i sometimes wonder what 'if' i were this or that too.....happiness is relative i guess...i enjoyed alot