drifting down a corridor,
a sudden glimpse:
the greenish haze
diffuses in her mind
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As Gina states this has a wonderfully dreamy flowing perfect form. 10 from dreams are the cake on the icing of her life, Tai
Dreamy words, dreamy images, dreamy flow, dream poem. Warm regards with a score of 10 from Gina.
Beautiful lyrical images weave in and out in this poem. It works well out loud. Sincerely, Alison