Monday, February 27, 2006

Idyllic Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

drifting down a corridor,
a sudden glimpse:
the greenish haze
diffuses in her mind
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Alison Cassidy 13 May 2006

Beautiful lyrical images weave in and out in this poem. It works well out loud. Sincerely, Alison

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***** ********* 27 February 2006

As Gina states this has a wonderfully dreamy flowing perfect form. 10 from dreams are the cake on the icing of her life, Tai

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Gina Onyemaechi 27 February 2006

Dreamy words, dreamy images, dreamy flow, dream poem. Warm regards with a score of 10 from Gina.

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