Saturday, June 21, 2008

Idols Of Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fascinating woman in blue of skies
Kindness cord with her scented ringlets ties
Love's bird towards her arc of brows flies
Life water in her dimple supplies
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Hela Jug 30 June 2008

so calming and serene...a 10.

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M M 22 June 2008

A magnificent and fine poem, here, Persian Nightigale! ! I like the softness and tenderness which flows from your words in this poem. 10!

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Evaughn Gray 22 June 2008

That was beautiful i loved it..nicly written ~Hazel Green Eyes

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Tsira Goge 21 June 2008

Excellent and thin poems, At you, the nightingale is in blood to eulogise... And even very naturally sounds, I very much appreciate Persian poetry, at us always was the big traditions of transfers....... 10....... Best wishes, Tsira

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Sarah Abdullah 21 June 2008

Life water in her dimple supplies Idols of paradise Are mesmerized by her bewitching hazel eyes Lovely

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Thad Wilk 21 June 2008

A fascination comes from the revelation of her hazel eyes, you idolize *10*! ! Another gem! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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