Friday, August 10, 2018

I.D.-Napping (Worthless Freudian Non-Cents) Comments

Rating: 4.1

My ID abducted my ego
On this roller-coaster of psychopathy, now we go
Down this tunnel, this shaded peephole
Another asylum re-run, another re-show
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Axley Jade Blaze
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Crayon Poet 03 September 2018

There's enough substance to your poem - both the obscure and well-defined - that I think a small book could be written about it. The possible conclusions are pythonic in scope and yet common to mankind - super job!

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Nicole Settimi 04 September 2018

As always thx for your comment / in-put. I appreciate the feedback immensely. It's interesting you should mention a book revolving around the theme. I have started to outline something to that effect, so I am enthused that you sort of prematurely saw it too. Thx again for the encourgaement and thoughtful rvw. Also - if you have recommendations for me, of your own work, pls do send them over so I can peruse.

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Crayon Poet 05 September 2018

Delighted, Nicole :)

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