Thursday, December 8, 2022

Idle Mind Comments

Rating: 3.7

He was alone in the house.
His idle mind was there too
enter the street, and make a living.
His mind encourage him
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Arapunachukwu Peter
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Such mob-violence happens in the so-called civilised societies too. Loved the poem, it's narrative. But what I enjoyed more is the satire and word-play on the proverbial "idle mind". Good one, dear poet.

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Chinedu Dike 13 December 2022

The brutality of mob justice is aptly portrayed in the poem. A highly relatable experience captured with insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Arapunachukwu Peter 18 December 2022

Thanks brother for reading my poem and your words of encouragement

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Pratyaksh Bhati 10 December 2022

it was something

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Arapunachukwu Peter 09 December 2022

Good keep it up

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