Wednesday, July 4, 2012

Idle In June Comments

Rating: 5.0

She dares not let the world hear her speak,
She's getting thin and looking meek,
A grey hair is splitting in her widows peak
She lays idle in the month of June.
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H.J. Shreeve
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Elin Grimes 10 July 2012

I like the understated darkness in this poem. It keeps the sadness and anger simmering.

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Ramesh Rai 06 July 2012

very sweet more than honey.

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H.J. Shreeve

H.J. Shreeve

Hobart, Tasmania
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