Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Thursday, March 17, 2016

Idle Folly Comments

Rating: 4.8

Idle Folly

Down at the corner barroom
The fellows gibe and jest
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Adeline Foster
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Annette Aitken 24 July 2016

A clever tale of people watching, with humour thrown in, nicely done Annette

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Pamela Sinicrope 22 April 2016

Love the ending. Fun piece of writing! I enjoyed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

A windome dame! Nice piece of work.

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Mike Smith 17 March 2016

Good one. This reminds me of the type of scene I could watch play out at the taverns in my hometown. Good use of rhyme and good storytelling. Thanks

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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