Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Idiot Box Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can't explain what sorrow i felt if was denied a show on your face,
how devastating it was for me to go through the pain of denial,
how wonderful you were was all i thought every time i watched you,
all the while with me....like my best friend,
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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 16 January 2010

My Grandad used to call the TV an idotbox, he said it would make your eyes square and rott your brain, i think that old world sentiment echos through this poem along with the phrase 'the devil makes work for idle thumbs' that comes to mind. At first you give the illusion of an unrequited love. Excellent poem i really like it!

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Khilil Perry 09 January 2010

wow it is clear that this is a great poem by a great poet I never thought about T.V. that way it is an Idiot box powerful emotions expressed perfect 20 if I could give it to you P&L.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 January 2010

So much time i have wasted on you, for my sleepless nights i blame you, needless to mention i was obsessed of you, not my escape but a grave are you, ...........................grace obsessive by joy of heart yet it rills on by reason of rage, still passionate as when intense nagging after concerns and doubts, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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