Sunday, April 23, 2006

Idiosyncrasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a sorghum field,
the drought had done its thing,
until the final vital drop
had gone into the atmosphere
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 23 April 2006

I can almost feel this desert land, Herbs. Likewise, I can almost smell, touch, and taste the skin on the intertwined limbs, and see that single, lonely patch of greenery. Sensuous and rich. G.

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Duncan Wyllie 23 April 2006

Some really great use of wording in this, Whilst I do not entirely understand its true meaning there are still aspects of this that are very enjoyable for the reader, Love Duncan

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Herbert Nehrlich1 23 April 2006

Thank you Sandra. I think we may have what we once had, and keep it. Forget convention.You have always been my special Chiffon Shakespeare to me. Love, Herbert

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Sandra Osborne 23 April 2006

I do so much love to read your work. I re-read 'Sandra' and did have between us there a moment of sweet embrace and shed a tear at what we once had. You are still and will always be my friend...10+, as always, my love. - CS

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Scarlett Treat 23 April 2006

Oasis in the desert.

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