Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Identity Crisis Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was afraid to love you,
And you had fought to me.
Desperation overtook fear
As life insufferably,
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Jake Erkens 17 March 2009

(Jake could not comment since he is not here at the moment, so I am helping him out a little.) Great poem. Nice emotions and word choice. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the title..Jake has a poem with the same title. :) . On behalf of Jake, God bless, Davke

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Beverley Fredborg 17 March 2009

I loved this! I read it a couple times and I think I sort of got the message after the second time. beautiful language and flow. WOW! !

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