I was afraid to love you,
And you had fought to me.
Desperation overtook fear
As life insufferably,
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I loved this! I read it a couple times and I think I sort of got the message after the second time. beautiful language and flow. WOW! !
(Jake could not comment since he is not here at the moment, so I am helping him out a little.) Great poem. Nice emotions and word choice. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the title..Jake has a poem with the same title. :) . On behalf of Jake, God bless, Davke