Friday, May 9, 2014

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I don't fear getting broken again,
crushed into pieces
washed away with monsoon rain.
All that I fear is to be found
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2016

All that I fear is to be found littered in a drain. And then being put together in someone else s fancy frame.- - - break me.. let me be free............ a poetic cry in distress or a real desire to be free at heart and soul in the real sense? ? lovely poem dear nalini . thank you. tony

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Donnie Wolff 10 May 2014

Despite it's sadness, there is something in this that feels good. Idk, maybe that doesn't make sense, but it does to me. Lol. I like it a lot

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